IF YOU DO NOT MIND READING THIS, THEN PLEASE ANSWER..... :)?

This need a lot of work. First of all, reviews and summaries are done mostly in the present tense and you skip around a lot. Go to sparknotes.com or shmoop,com and read how a summary should be written. You can't copy it, but you'll see the tenses and structures. Once you've got that, you can put i your opinions.